The Highest Converting Long-Form Sales Page You’ve Ever Built
Tired of Having This Annoying Problem?
- In this top section, emphasize a big problem or frustration that your audience has.
- This is a problem that your product will solve for them, of course.
- However, at this point, we’re not talking about the product yet. Think of it as telling a story, where you don’t want to rush to the ending right away.
Hi, I’m Shane. Give the page a personal touch by adding your image below and introducing yourself with a short sentence.
From the desk of,
Alexander Ubaka
Hi friend,
Running a Facebbok ad is different from running a profitable Facebook ad. If you’ve ever tried running one, I am sure you know that I am right.
Come to think of it, What does it take to run an Ad on Facebook? The content, Image and a link.
But then, I have met lots of poeple, both clients and freinds who say stuff like “Facebook ads don’t work, I’ll rather use an offline means”
And guess what?
Whenever I dig deeper, I always find out that they’ve tried using it for their business and failed woefully.
Yet Facebook still is one of the biggest customer and income source for thousands of other businesses.
If you’ve been there, you’re not alone
I once ran an ad to sell a product. It wasn’t my first time running one but it was one of the most memorable campaign i have ever created, because it was terrible.
After a few days, I went from elated about making sales to fustrated. It was totally humiliating.
I wondered what my partner thought of me. Surely he thought less of me, after all I was supposed to bring in the sales as the expert.
Perhaps, I should have used a different headline in the ad copy. I wondered what went wrong.
In my fustration, I made tweaks after tweaks. killed some ads, changed the headlines, experimented with different call to action.
pheew! That sour feeling of loosing money and not delivering on the business goal I and my partner set out to achieve.
Now here’s the unbelievable “punche line”, just 2 years down the line, we spent a little over N8,000 on Facebook ads to make over N2Million, and we weren’t even half-way through the ad budget.
What was different?
AFTER YEARS OF TRIAL AND ERROR, MAKING MISTAKES HERE AND THERE AND LOOSING MONEY AFTER MONEY TO FACEBOOK IN THE BID TO GET IT RIGHT– I FINALLY FOUND THE ULTIMATE STRATGY TO MAKING ANY FACEBOOK CAMPAIGN WORK IRRESPECTIVE OF WHAT YOU’RE SELLING.After this REAL expert “tweaked” what I was doing –
used an ad budget Anyway, unlike most poeple, I didn’t stop running Facebook ads. I knew they worked and I must have made a mistake for not getting the results I wanted.
Fast forward to 2019, after runing ads with some failing and others succeeding, I have discovered what makes some Facebook ads win and some others fall face flat.
If you have ever run an ad before that failed, this will show you why it did, and if you are a total beginner, this will save you lots of money and fustrations.
There a number of problems every business owner faces. But one stands out among many others.
Everybody understands it, and if you don’t, or are not troubled by it, then you haven’t done business enough. Try aiming for business growth, and it will stand in your way.
It is the problem of acquiring a new customer.
By the way: short paragraphs and highlight boxes like the one above are a great way to keep the text light and easy to read. Don’t overwhelm your visitors with a “wall of text”.
IF I CAN SHOW YOU HOW TO RUN A FACEBOOK ADS ThAT’LL MAKE YOU CONSISTENT MONEY – HOW MUCH SHOULD I CHARGE YOU FOR MY HELP? MAYBE A BIG, FAT FEE. NO, NOT EVEN CLOSE.
I have used this Facebook ads system for different business sectors and it brings in the same mind blowing results every single time.
I once used it for a client in the Forex Niche…and we made ******** in **** days
WHY WOULD I SHARE ALL THIS WITH YOU? First, it takes nothing away from me to let you in on everything I’ve discovered.
You see, people apply what they learn differently, to different products and different markets. So I lose nothing by sharing.
Second, I want to push this out so that you can use it in your own buisness and share with me the results you got.
Remember, I know what it’s like in trying out Facebook ads and ending up fustrated and depressed. To be unsure, scared, embarrassed.
To see others get better results and wonder: why them – not me? And to look for help but end up getting “trash.”
Don’t Jump to the Sale too Quickly: Long Form is All About Building Rapport
When I realized that many people even beginners could use my System and quickly get the results they wanted, I got excited about teaching people how to do that. YOU BE THE JUDGE. I KNOW, IT’S HARD TO BELIEVE, BUT WHAT IF I’M RIGHT?
The Simple Storytelling Rule for Sales: Convince First, Sell Second!
With my “Profitable Facebook Ad for beginners Course,” you are getting the inside story of the best way to run a Facebook ad that’s ever been invented!
By the way, when I was thinking of a name for this course, I was hoping to come up with something tush and polished.
You know, something that’ll make you go “wow, I want that.”
Well, I guess that’s what I could come up with. I’m just plain, ordinary guy. A gunners fan. I have absolutely no special education, training, experience or qualifications likely to make me a success in Facebook advertising.
EVERYTHING I’ve done to go from a failure in Facebook advertising to making over 2-million Naira in 7 days, can be your “success blueprint” too.
Trying to sell too soon is the most commonly made mistake – not only on long form sales pages. Even if your page is short and visual, without relating to your customer, you can’t make sales.
Also remember that what you’re looking at is only a template. Maybe you want to spend more time on the story. Maybe you want to add several more headline + text blocks, to really elaborate and evoke emotions. With Thrive, you can easily do so (just duplicate some of the existing blocks). Let the template inspire you, but don’t let it limit you.
You’ve set the scene. You’ve captured your visitors’ attention. You’ve related to them and told them everything they need to know to truly understand what your product is about. Now it’s time to start introducing them to the product.
Keep one thing in mind: your product is the solution. At first, don’t talk about it in terms of a product. Talk about how you found a solution and about how this same solution can help others too. Why do all this? Because if you set it up right, you will be the opposite of the slimy, used car salesman stereotype we all despise… you will not be pushing product, you’ll be doing everyone a favor.
Here is a Smaller Sub-Heading for Extra Emphasis
Try mixing paragraphs with sub-headings of two different sizes (H2 and H3). You can use smaller sub-headings like the one above to make an important point or for quotes that relate to your story.
Ever notice how non-fiction authors love to use quotes throughout their books? That’s because quotes are a nice change of page and they lend authority and gravitas to what you’re saying.
Similarly, you can use subtle text highlights, text boxes, short paragraphs, sub-headings and other text formatting to draw your reader’s eye to important parts of the text. This also helps break up the page, to prevent wall-of-text-syndrome.
Introducing…
THE Profitable Facebook Ad for beginners
Here’s what You’ll Get
- 1Show a product image: it’s always a good idea to have a visual representation of your product. It makes it more tangible and more “real” in your reader’s mind.
- 2The power of the points list: use this list to emphasize the most important benefits of your product.
- 3Benefits over features: for every feature your product has, try to translate it into a benefit (i.e. a positive end-result your customer will get).
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You are fully protected by our 100% Satisfaction-Guarantee. If you don’t get [a specific benefit that your product promises] by [a specific span of time in which you guarantee your product to yield results], just let us know and we’ll send you a prompt refund.
Shane Melaugh
Creator of [Product Name]
About the Author
When selling online, it’s easy to forget that people prefer buying things from other people. If there’s any element of personal branding in your product, use this section to write a few paragraphs about yourself.
Keep it short, as this page is about your product, not your life story. But a few personal details mentioned here can help build rapport with your reader. It’s a reminder that there’s a real, trustworthy person behind this product and they aren’t buying from a faceless corporation.
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